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Demoiselle Larc en ciel noir

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Date Story Comments from Demoiselle Larc en ciel noir Gentle's response Rating
30/09/2005 9:50:33 p.m. Electronically Wow, this was a trip! It rivals even our (mine and my friend's) best anthro mrp. I liked it! See, told ya! :-)
21/09/2005 10:39:23 p.m. This is the girl... Nice ending, never saw that coming! Oh, good!
25/08/2005 9:24:36 p.m. Allison's Long Weekend - Part 1 Not only do I recommend and insist you put it on the site, I ask you to get her to let you put Chapter 2 there too. Passed on to Cam for comment.
12/08/2005 7:43:28 a.m. Hey gorgeous Certainly a departure from your other works. I liked the spontenaity, but ***** isn't one of my quirks, so it didn't turn me on as much as it did them, lol. Damn! Oh well. :-)
9/08/2005 7:30:13 a.m. Alice Pt 4 The best of the four, by far. I truly enjoyed this one the most. It's the first time I've ever seen anyone taken with the aid of a mind altering substance, lol, but then, the whole land was mind altering. Well done. It can only get worse!
9/08/2005 7:29:33 a.m. Alice Pt 2 Mhmm, just as I thought. I like part two better than part one, and I figured out what the difference was. I didn't find part one had any humor, at least not the sort I've come to expect from your work. This piece did have the humor. I suppose in my mind that's what sets your work apart; sexy and funny. Ah, that's good!
9/08/2005 7:29:00 a.m. Alice Part 1 eh, not sure how to be honest yet polite about this one...let's say it's not as pleasing to me as your other work, but maybe part 2 will be more to my liking. Oh oh. :-)
27/07/2005 4:53:53 a.m. The doorstep On top of a perfectly randy story, you throw this humorous, random kink in the coil, and it can take you by surprise. Well done.
10/06/2005 6:59:29 a.m. The Swap Part 5 Oh! What a lovely resolution to your quintet, even if it is a bit odd! All of the stories were great, and pretty much satisfied all of my "what would it be like with twins" questions. Well done! Odd? What do you mean odd? :-)
9/04/2005 9:49:29 a.m. The Swap Part 4 Ooh, so much fun packed into four short stories! Hard to say what my favorite part was, everything was so loverly. Well done; always wondered what it would be like with twins. So... Should I write the last part yet??
9/04/2005 9:43:12 a.m. Twas the night Good grief. You must now be on the permanent Good list, for giving Santa such a luscious present. Naughty boy! He only checks the list twice, and I sneak in afterwards and add my name.
7/04/2005 11:01:22 p.m. The Ritual Wow...I've read stories with similar threads, but none so richly detailed, and I especially liked the way the deity entered the avatar to help her along. No thunderous proclamations, just tender passion. It was touching, and made her experience that much more special. Oh, thank you very much!
7/04/2005 7:29:10 p.m. He had a big clock Loved it, I could well imagine her *****. Pity, though the way it ended; sounds as though now she can't ***** anymore. Sorry to bleep you, but you gave the story away!
21/02/2005 It starts with a castle Well done. It could rival Sue Johansen and Teresa Medeiros any day of the week, were it a book and not a short story. Oh, no... I don't know who they are!
24/01/2005 Orange This story of yours, as others you have penned, is exquisite...